Almost Full Achievement Rough

So, on the left is a very rough new comp of what the "full achievement" would look like. This is slapped together using some clipart, mixed with drawings and doodles I've done previously. Only thing its missing are the supporters, or dudes on the sides that hold up the shield, some STL iconography i wanna get in around it, and the motto. 

I did some research today and found that the motto doesnt have to be a family motto, and can/should be personalized per person, since all of the other elements are meant to be the same for the family. 

Just as a reminder, the "shield" itself is really the "coat of arms". It is the most important element of the whole package. I just wanted to put it in context, but focus on the layout and arrangement of the shield mainly. Theres a few color comps that give a rough idea of what it could look like. 

I'm not TOTALLY in love with it, but I'd love to hear what you guys think.